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Text from Zig-zag - English

  • Spy our children ?

  • Do you think parents have a right to invade their children's privacy in order to protect him ?
  • When I read this quote, it's all my body who cry « no ».
  • But, I can't really understand the point of view of the parents, because I'm not.
  • I can't really imagine what is the feeling beeing parents.
  • The feer, the need to know.
  • A famous french quote say « One persones freedom begins where that of another ends » We can't go in someone's life.
  • We can't go in the life of our children on pretext of their are our childrens.
  • They aren't puppet.
  • They are poeple too.
  • They have the right to have a privacy life and predominatingly when it's their parents who want spy them.
  • There is a wall between childrens and parents.
  • A curtain who allow a good relationship in the family.
  • The privacy life of every members of this family.
  • A secret garden.
  • If parents want to protect their children, they must to proove that they trust them.
  • When the children have the trust of their parents, he knows that it's a bruttke thing abd normally, he doesn't will to play with this limites.
  • A parent can protect his children with a lot of answers.
  • But they don't must psy their childrens only to be reassure, only to remember that they are parents, only to remember they have the power.
  • Be a parent doesn't mind have the total power.
  • Be a parent mind make their childrens happy, and let them lead a teenager life without control everything.
  • A teenager need to breathe.

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