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Hello everyone!
My name is Melody.
It's not my true name, but I like this name, music, dancing...
I'm Vietnamese girl, I'm 24 years old.
I'm study in Paris.
What do you think about Paris?!
In my opinion, I thinks it's amazing country, beautiful about theirs stories with many monument.
But sometimes, the people they are so hard.
I like traveling, dancing, cooking, fashion, sport, and meeting news friends.
I'm here now to learn English and speak commonly English.
Nice to meet you.

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- My name is Melody.
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- It's not my true name, but I like this name, music, dancing...
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- I'm Vietnamese girl, I'm 24 years old.
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- I'm study in Paris.
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- What do you think about Paris?!
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- In my opinion, I thinks it's amazing country, beautiful about theirs stories with many monument.
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- But sometimes, the people they are so hard.
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- I like traveling, dancing, cooking, fashion, sport, and meeting news friends.
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- I'm here now to learn English and speak commonly English.
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- Nice to meet you.
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