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  • Help Blood:Water or not. (homework)

  • I will not give help at this association because she's based on the christian charity ("motivated by the love of Christ"), wich is a sort of capitalistic help : give a little at those who have nothing and support the unequal sharing of wealth.
  • Howhever, I thin I must admit that Blood:Water really try to help people in need and that they act when many people only hink about it.
  • Thy spend lot of energy, not just money.
  • But in my mind, the way to fight against poverty should be political.
  • Indeed it would be necessary to develop education, professional training, access to employment and to improve redistribution.
  • I know it's easy to say those things and that what makes this association is cool, and better than nothing..
  • Whatever, if I must support this kind of help, i prefer give money to laic one's.

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    • I will not give help at this association because she's based on the christian charity ("motivated by the love of Christ"), wich is a sort of capitalistic help : give a little at those who have nothing and support the unequal sharing of wealth.
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    • Howhever, I thin I must admit that Blood:Water really try to help people in need and that they act when many people only hink about it.
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    • Indeed it would be necessary to develop education, professional training, access to employment and to improve redistribution.
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