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Hi my name is Helena and I'm 15 years old.
I'm from Germany and I'd like to learn more English.
English is my favorite language and I wanna move to San Francisco when I'm older.
I love speaking english but I don't have anybody to speak to in english.

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- Hi my name is Helena and I'm 15 years old.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm from Germany and I'd like to learn more English.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- English is my favorite language and I wanna move to San Francisco when I'm older.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I love speaking english but I don't have anybody to speak to in english.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4