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My Day
Today is the day I left home.
I very long awaited this day because I missed my friends and family.
I will meet my dad.
And then we will go home together to eat with my mom.
I'm looking forward.

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- My Day
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句子 1
- Today is the day I left home.
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句子 2
- I very long awaited this day because I missed my friends and family.
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句子 3
- I will meet my dad.
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句子 4
- And then we will go home together to eat with my mom.
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句子 5
- I'm looking forward.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5