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Văn bản từ naseos - English

  • TASK 2

  • Introduction.
  • The aim of this report is to give my opinion of how to spend the available money to improve the facilities in our college.
  • Place to improve, the gym.
  • This space is small, not well ventilated and lighted; we are thirty of us in the class, sweating as we are a bit crowed.
  • The material we used, as mats, is used and broken-down.
  • The showers in the changing room have not pressure. Improvements.
  • I will change the blind windows for other that can be opened to have a better ventilation, about the light I would use led panels which not used much electricity but give more light up.
  • I will buy new material to replace the old ones and introduce new sports as Pilates, Boxing… As I talked with the other students we would like recommend to everybody to bring a towel to be used over the mats to care of the new material.
  • To conclude, without spending a lot of money the gym can be improved and with the cooperation of all the students the new material can be used for many more years.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • The aim of this report is to give my opinion of how to spend the available money to improve the facilities in our college.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • This space is small, not well ventilated and lighted; we are thirty of us in the class, sweating as we are a bit crowed.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
  • câu 7
    • I will change the blind windows for other that can be opened to have a better ventilation, about the light I would use led panels which not used much electricity but give more light up.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • I will buy new material to replace the old ones and introduce new sports as Pilates, Boxing… As I talked with the other students we would like recommend to everybody to bring a towel to be used over the mats to care of the new material.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • To conclude, without spending a lot of money the gym can be improved and with the cooperation of all the students the new material can be used for many more years.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9