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  • an essay about debating dinosaur's structure

  • The auther of the reading passage give some reasons that the Sinosauropteryx was not a feathered dinosaur.But the lecture claim that the fine lines are the feathered dinosaur strongly.
  • According to the lecture that the lines are not the decomposition of the dinosaur's skin, the other animals's skin also can't see the decomposition, and they had beautiful and well-preserve skin as well as the Sinosauropteryx, it's functional structure for Sinosauropteryx.
  • The reading passage, by the contrast, suggest that the fine lines may form after the dinosaur's desth.
  • The second point, of different between the lecture and the reading passage concerns that the feathers and the frills are different chamical consistent, and feathers have a kind of protein but the frills are not, and the Sinosauropteryx contained this kind of protein.
  • So, the fine lines are more likely to feathers.
  • Finally, the lecture argues that feathers also can use for display like the birds had detials feather, witch is long and colorful, and the Sinosauropteryx use it to display either.
  • And then, it also use it to fly.
  • However, the reading passage contents that the fine lines were useless Sinosauropteryx to fly or assist them keep warm.

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  • Sentence 1
    • The auther of the reading passage give some reasons that the Sinosauropteryx was not a feathered dinosaur.But the lecture claim that the fine lines are the feathered dinosaur strongly.
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  • Sentence 2
    • According to the lecture that the lines are not the decomposition of the dinosaur's skin, the other animals's skin also can't see the decomposition, and they had beautiful and well-preserve skin as well as the Sinosauropteryx, it's functional structure for Sinosauropteryx.
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  • Sentence 4
    • The second point, of different between the lecture and the reading passage concerns that the feathers and the frills are different chamical consistent, and feathers have a kind of protein but the frills are not, and the Sinosauropteryx contained this kind of protein.
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  • Sentence 6
    • Finally, the lecture argues that feathers also can use for display like the birds had detials feather, witch is long and colorful, and the Sinosauropteryx use it to display either.
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