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My hobby
Hello everybody!
In this "article" i'll talk you about my dog!
I love the animals specially dogs.
Some years ago i had got a chiuhauha dog!
She' a female and she's enough agressive with the people that she don't know!
I love her but i had to give to a couple because i don't have much time to stand with her!

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- My hobby
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- Hello everybody!
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- In this "article" i'll talk you about my dog!
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- I love the animals specially dogs.
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- Some years ago i had got a chiuhauha dog!
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- She' a female and she's enough agressive with the people that she don't know!
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- I love her but i had to give to a couple because i don't have much time to stand with her!
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