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Board game in my life
Hello everyone!
I would like to tell you about my hobby.
I love board games.
I often play with my friends in different board games.
One day I decided to make a board game.
I came up with the mechanics of the game, he drew a simple illustrations and the game was ready.
For several months I have only played with friends, but then I got the idea to make this game accessible to all.
I found a good artist, who made excellent illustrations, detailed written rules and even launched a crowdfunding to raise money for the release of the first edition.
Now I am looking for like-minded people who also love board games.
I believe that I will succeed!

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- Board game in my life
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문장 1
- Hello everyone!
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문장 2
- I would like to tell you about my hobby.
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문장 3
- I love board games.
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문장 4
- I often play with my friends in different board games.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- One day I decided to make a board game.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- I came up with the mechanics of the game, he drew a simple illustrations and the game was ready.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- For several months I have only played with friends, but then I got the idea to make this game accessible to all.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
문장 8
- I found a good artist, who made excellent illustrations, detailed written rules and even launched a crowdfunding to raise money for the release of the first edition.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
문장 9
- Now I am looking for like-minded people who also love board games.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9
문장 10
- I believe that I will succeed!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10