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My life
Hello, I am kelly, I am twenty fours years old and I live in Tours in France.
I learn in english for my future job.
I would like to be a sales adminitrative assistante.
It is difficult for me but I need it.

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- My life
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句子 1
- Hello, I am kelly, I am twenty fours years old and I live in Tours in France.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I learn in english for my future job.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I would like to be a sales adminitrative assistante.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- It is difficult for me but I need it.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4