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Text from Sandra_Ph - English

  • The dream of Egypt

  • When I was a child I really wanted to visit Egypt.
  • I loved mythology, especially of Egypt, it intrigued me very much.
  • So my parents presented me a book of ancient Egypt.
  • It was not a thick book, but I was fascinated by it.
  • There were lots of illustrations in it as every child would want.
  • I remember how I was reclining on a bed and read that book, even though I didn't like reading very much at the time.
  • I thought how it would be wonderful see all those pyramids and sphinxes that I read about.
  • Sometimes I dreamed about me wandering along the roads of Cairo or going along the Nile river from the Upper Egypt down to Lower Egypt on a boat.
  • And yet I never though it could be possible.
  • Nobody from the people I knew never have been visiting another country.
  • It was crazy even think about it.
  • It seemed as though other part of the world was on an other planet, so difficult it was to us.
  • So we didn't even planned this kind of event and never talked about it.
  • Though personally I thought that I definitely will visit another country when I grew older.
  • And it happend, much earlier than I thought it would be.
  • Now it don't seems to me so impossible.
  • I know it souds melodramatically, but maybe one's right when one says 'everything can happen as lond as you keep dreaming'.

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