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從Theus來的文本 - English

  • My first time here.

  • Hey everyone, My name is Matheus, I'm new in this community and I enjoyed here.
  • I want learn English to travel the world and meet people around him.
  • I love fitness lifestyle, movies, parties and beach.
  • I can teach portuguese too.
  • I don't know what else to say for the first time. kkkkkkkk See you guys. ;)

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