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Text from ArwenNguyen - English

  • New day has come

  • I don't want to share my private life in facebook, zalo, or any communication internets like that.
  • Just because I don't want me to famous to anybody can understand how I feel, what I met...
  • So I avoided many things, it keeps me alert but it also took me something on my way, especial confidence.
  • I passed a hard time over.
  • And now when I can feel fine, I can see something that I don't want me to meet again. It was hard.
  • Now the future is challenging me, I know what is going on and I will accept it.
  • I tried to learn English to walk right through.
  • Learning new language like an adventure with me.
  • Every single day, I find ways to enhance my memorise to keep new words on my brain.
  • It helped me a little bit to get confidence back.
  • But, you know, I am really afraid of grammar and writing.
  • I force myself to write diary everyday.
  • It does not change anything.
  • I wish i were an American to be native English speaker. Crazy, right?
  • I am Vietnamese.
  • The country can beat another strong country.
  • I should be proud of that.
  • Return to my English way.
  • I try learning many methods from the internet, but I failed at all.
  • I want to master English, that my choice.
  • Because I know, English is a turning point in my life, it can make me becoming better than before.

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