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  • Cheryl's birthday

  • Since I not speak english very well.
  • I can only write short texts.
  • It's my first shot message in English in my life.
  • I recently read a puzzle about Cheryl's birthday.
  • That is too long to read.
  • There are too many superfluous words.
  • I can make this story shorter without loss of meaning. So.
  • Albert and Bernard want to know when cheryl's birthday is.
  • Cheryl gives them a list of 10 possible dates.
  • (Here, I think it is necessary to change places the dates.
  • It also allows to make the solution of this problem less evident.) She gives them: 15 may, 14 july, 17 august, 14 august, 16 may, 16 july, 19 may, 17 june, 15 august, 18 june.
  • Next, imagine a dialogue between two boys: Albert: I don't know when Cheryl's birthday, as Bernard.
  • Bernard: Now, I know when!
  • Albert: And so I am!
  • When is Cheryl's birthday?

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