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Exercice
I was a very lazy person for do exercise.
But I went to the doctor because I felt I'll, the doctor suggest to do working out.
Then I started to run all days.
Since I've felt very good.
I've also motived to my girlfriend, she said me she likes too.
Whole people should do working out.Now I wake up early all days, at 5 a.m.

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- I was a very lazy person for do exercise.
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문장 2
- But I went to the doctor because I felt I'll, the doctor suggest to do working out.
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- Then I started to run all days.
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문장 4
- Since I've felt very good.
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문장 5
- I've also motived to my girlfriend, she said me she likes too.
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문장 6
- Whole people should do working out.Now I wake up early all days, at 5 a.m.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6