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  • Please describe your main achievement.

  • There are a lot of achievements in my extra-curriculum activity to be proud of, for example a grant for participation at conference in Germany, reaching the national final of “Global Management Challenge” as a team member, different publications and so on.
  • But my main achievement what I would like to outline is my university graduation with distinction.
  • Why do I choose it?
  • I think there is a great difference between short-term tasks such as business-cases and conferences and hard work on a daily basis.
  • The diploma with distinction reflects in my opinion one’s stability and excellence at work, an ability to motivate him/herself in a long term, that’s why having such achievement is important.
  • Also it’s like a reward for years of work, what is pleasantly anyhow.

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    • There are a lot of achievements in my extra-curriculum activity to be proud of, for example a grant for participation at conference in Germany, reaching the national final of “Global Management Challenge” as a team member, different publications and so on.
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    • I think there is a great difference between short-term tasks such as business-cases and conferences and hard work on a daily basis.
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    • The diploma with distinction reflects in my opinion one’s stability and excellence at work, an ability to motivate him/herself in a long term, that’s why having such achievement is important.
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