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My first text
Hi, guy's !
My name is Ira.
I live in Russia.
In my life it is many interesting story.
But now I tense and I do not remember.
Now my friends seats with me and they said jokes about me and my serious face) They distracting me and I not concentrate in the text.
I love my crazy friends, but sometimes I was hungry on them) My life is very happy and funny thanks to friends.
Dear guys, I ask you correct me, please.
Thank you very much. Goodbye

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- My first text
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문장 1
- Hi, guy's !
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문장 2
- My name is Ira.
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문장 3
- I live in Russia.
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문장 4
- In my life it is many interesting story.
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문장 5
- But now I tense and I do not remember.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- Now my friends seats with me and they said jokes about me and my serious face) They distracting me and I not concentrate in the text.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- I love my crazy friends, but sometimes I was hungry on them) My life is very happy and funny thanks to friends.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
문장 8
- Dear guys, I ask you correct me, please.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
문장 9
- Thank you very much. Goodbye
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9