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Okay, I've just done my first entry in this club, 'cause I'd like to improve my english, ehm..( I think that mine sucks.) I don't even know if I'm speaking correctly, but if I never try, I'll never know...right?

So, I need some friends that (please) won't judge me.

This text looks like a disperate pray (?) Can I say in this way?

I don't know hahaha mhh... things about me...

I like sining playing my guitar and piano, that i'm learning.

My biggest passion is singing, and I'd like to write my songs in english, I mean, correctly.

:D And surely I must learn how this club works.

Please don't think that I'm crazy, I didn't know what to say, I'm so shy :/ So, bye :D