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In conclusion I want to say that this story is thought- provoking and instructive.
The author shows us problems of relationships in family.
We should more communicate with our future children, be interested them problems and spend a lot of free time with them.
In my opinion, family is very important in life.
I want to say that we should appreciate and save our families , because money and career won't replace it.

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- In conclusion I want to say that this story is thought- provoking and instructive.
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- The author shows us problems of relationships in family.
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- We should more communicate with our future children, be interested them problems and spend a lot of free time with them.
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- In my opinion, family is very important in life.
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- I want to say that we should appreciate and save our families , because money and career won't replace it.
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