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Second day
Hey !
That's the second day that I am using this website and I am happy !
:) I think I will watch a movie in english without subtitles to train my oral comprehension.
I don't know yet the movie but I will choose an action movie.
Every day now, i will try to do 30 minutes minimum of english plus one movie in english.
I hope i will progress faster like that :) Tomorrow, I will tell you what I choosen and if I liked it. Thanks Ak

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- Second day
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- Hey !
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- That's the second day that I am using this website and I am happy !
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- :) I think I will watch a movie in english without subtitles to train my oral comprehension.
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- I don't know yet the movie but I will choose an action movie.
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- Every day now, i will try to do 30 minutes minimum of english plus one movie in english.
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- I hope i will progress faster like that :) Tomorrow, I will tell you what I choosen and if I liked it. Thanks Ak
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