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從Carivaldo來的文本 - English

Greetings!
Hello guys!
This is my first English text here.
I'll talk about me, my schedules, job, studies, a little about my life.
Well, I'm a Electronic Technician and I work from 07:30 to 05:18 pm.
At night I'll go to university, I study Electrical Engineering.
I like wath Tv series, play the guitar, play karate, but becouse of my studies I don't have much time, so I had to stop.
Sometimes I lost sleep night studying, but is nice, rsrs!
I'm looking for someone that want learn Portuguese, I want learn speak English too.
If you think a nice idea, look for me.
My Skype is Carivaldo Gontijo. Thanks!

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- Greetings!
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句子 1
- Hello guys!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- This is my first English text here.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I'll talk about me, my schedules, job, studies, a little about my life.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Well, I'm a Electronic Technician and I work from 07:30 to 05:18 pm.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- At night I'll go to university, I study Electrical Engineering.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- I like wath Tv series, play the guitar, play karate, but becouse of my studies I don't have much time, so I had to stop.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- Sometimes I lost sleep night studying, but is nice, rsrs!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- I'm looking for someone that want learn Portuguese, I want learn speak English too.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- If you think a nice idea, look for me.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
句子 10
- My Skype is Carivaldo Gontijo. Thanks!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10