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A Spacewalk to Remember
Hello everyone .
I have something to do in English.
I have to do resum of " A Spacewalk to Remember" by Laura Blackburn.
I really need help please :/

lilou1234May 2015100% GOOD (1 votes)
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标题
- A Spacewalk to Remember
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句子 1
- Hello everyone .
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句子 2
- I have something to do in English.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I have to do resum of " A Spacewalk to Remember" by Laura Blackburn.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I really need help please :/
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4