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Text from Mikkori - English

Hi!
Hi, I am Tanya.
I like to read, watch films, listen to music :D My hobbies it is write the poems, take a photo, play drums, also I like collecting cactuses, but generally I have a many hobbies..
I very want to learn the English language and I must to learn it.
Please, help me in this study :3 I hope you ^______^

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- Hi!
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- Hi, I am Tanya.
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- I like to read, watch films, listen to music :D My hobbies it is write the poems, take a photo, play drums, also I like collecting cactuses, but generally I have a many hobbies..
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- I very want to learn the English language and I must to learn it.
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