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My board game
Dear friends, your Russian comrades are really interested to create a new steampunk board-game.
It calls Parozemelye (Steamland).
We spent a lot of time to make it real and now it is almost done.
The first edition is in progress.
But we need your help to make real this idea.
We need your support.
Even 1 euro is significant for the project.
Please do not be indifferent to this begining and Steam God will bless you!
Follow us on the crowdfunding plaatform:https://boomstarter.ru/projects/atyakunov/nastolnaya_..
And in our group in facebook: https://www.facebook.com/groups/parozemelye/

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- My board game
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Dear friends, your Russian comrades are really interested to create a new steampunk board-game.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- It calls Parozemelye (Steamland).
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- We spent a lot of time to make it real and now it is almost done.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- The first edition is in progress.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- But we need your help to make real this idea.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- We need your support.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- Even 1 euro is significant for the project.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- Please do not be indifferent to this begining and Steam God will bless you!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- Follow us on the crowdfunding plaatform:https://boomstarter.ru/projects/atyakunov/nastolnaya_..
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
句子 10
- And in our group in facebook: https://www.facebook.com/groups/parozemelye/
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10