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  • VERY IMPORTANT

  • Firstable , they are two paintings.
  • One is painting by Constable , the Hay Wain , the other by Banksy , a English graffiti artist, countryside cctv.
  • The Hay wain painted in oils on canvas.
  • In the center three horses pulling a hay wain across the river, on the left hand side a cottage.
  • Both landscapes have got few similarities as an imposing sky with creepy colors that give us an awkward feeling.
  • The artists used the same warm colors.
  • The trees look the similar species , the colors is a shades of green.
  • We cannot say if those threes have lost some of their leaves.
  • In both paintings we found a river , through these rivers we can see the landscapes reflections.
  • We also can say that they is some differences.
  • In banksy’s painting , there is a surveillance camera , we’ve see the same surveillance camera on the right hand side.
  • These CCTV Cameras are banksy’s message.
  • Indeed Banksy adores provoking, shocking the society by denouncing abuse of the society as the violation of the private life in UK by the CCTV will be on drugs.For example , there is 4 millions cameras in Britain and 144 silent cameras 24 a day.This is why Banksy choosed constable’s painting to send .
  • If Banksy put these CCTV cameras on this quiet and peaceful landscape it means “ You see ,we are being watched everywhere, in all the country.
  • “So yes, in Britain , CCTV is also in the countryside .
  • Nowadays ; the Hay wain is one of the greatest and most popular English paintings.
  • I think Banksy use the hay wain to warn us against the abuses of surveillance.
  • Everybody is constaly being watched all the time and everywhere.
  • This surveillance threatens our freedom.

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