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IMPROVE MY ENGLISH
Somebody could help me to improve my English?
I started an English course last week.
I really liked it.
Now, I need someone to help me everyday with my home work.
Kisses from Brazil :)

RaquelRJMay 2015赶紧投票吧！
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标题
- IMPROVE MY ENGLISH
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Somebody could help me to improve my English?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I started an English course last week.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I really liked it.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Now, I need someone to help me everyday with my home work.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Kisses from Brazil :)
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5