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Text from Caroline-mj - English

  • A week end without end

  • Hi !
  • My name is Caroline and I'm new one here.
  • Today, I would like to show you that it must not say some words to the sky, like you not want to come back when you are in holidays.
  • My bestfriends and me have visited London last years and we loved it.
  • But this trip was so short.
  • So we have to decide to come back for four days.
  • It was fantastic.
  • We found a good youth hostel with bedrooms which are a little smaller than in the pictures.
  • But the bed was good and nobody have snored.
  • We visited Belgravia Square, Buckingham Palace, Hyde Park and say hello to Peter Pan's statue...
  • A very good week end which have a end unfortunately.
  • We were sad and screamed at everyone that we didn't want to come back in France but live forever in this place...
  • at least me I stay and I'll invite her and her boyfriend.
  • But when we wanted to come back in our youth hostel to take our luggage, we lost ourself in tube.
  • 30 min later, we finally arrive in Paddington station and we ran to get back our luggage and come back in the subway.
  • But, there was a lot of Paddington station !
  • And one of it named "Paddington Heathrow"; the name of our aeroport.
  • Stressed, we took this way before to discover that it was not a tube station but a express train which was very expensive !
  • Here we go to find an other way into the London's tubes !
  • Our plane was at 8h10 pm and we had only one hour.
  • Finally, we joined the Picadilly line but, of course, the train have a problem and stop it for few minutes.
  • After, we discovered that our place, whose register by internet, wasn't record.
  • When we finally arrived in the areoport, we went until the counter and ask them to call the plane and explain our situation.
  • They didn't want to listen and tell us to ask at a other personn of adminstration's services which is far far away.
  • When we finally arrived, a lady didn't want to leave us talk with the woman a few minutes and take all of time to buy a other ticket.
  • The administration's woman,by the way, didn't want to help us and grumbled when we return to buy a other ticket to wenesday's morning.
  • She is hungry because it was her service's end.
  • It's too bad for us.
  • She told us that the ticket was less expensive if we take in internet but, when we tried, it was wrong.
  • The young price was 100 £ and not 80 £ as she said.
  • Moreover, the money card of my friend didn't work, and I was not sure to could pay.
  • So we have belived that we are condemn to leave in this aero^port London !
  • Very ironic situation doesn't it ?
  • At this moment, we wanted more than anything in the world to come back in France !
  • In particular me, because I worked next day and I should begin at 10h30 AM !
  • Finally we have passed our night in London and come back in France at 6 AM !
  • I hope my little story was diverting and I please to scuse me to the fault.
  • I really need help to the grammar ! Thank you.

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