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Text from TanyaDudkina - English

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  • The article is about who are football fans, their habits, custons and pastimes.
  • The author's communicative aim is to make us reconsider our attitude to this youth group.
  • Most people believe that all football fans are hooligans, but it isn't so.
  • In his article the author touches upon several problems related to poor organization of youth leisure, the problem of vandalism and the problem of unhealthy joy of their team.
  • At the beginning of his article the author reveals who is a football fan.
  • He is convinced that fan's work is a set of rituals.
  • There are a lot of attributes, for example: am bands, flags, T-shirts and caps.
  • They usually cheer supporting their favoutite team.
  • Also they meet out of stadium discussing their team and humbling the opposing team.
  • At the next paragraph the author takes up a firm attitude that young people are attracted by such a move as football fans because they can share their feelings and talk about their favorite team with the same people who is interested in it.
  • Undoubtedly, the author criticizes the negative activities of football fans such as fights, graffity and as well as large-scale fighting with other team.
  • Finally the author concludes that many teens simply playing fans because of their partner is not organized as follows.
  • I strongly disagree with the author's opinion.
  • To tell the truth in our society there are a lot of young clubs and arganizations, which usefully spend their leisure time.
  • As for support of the team, a person can watch the game in the sport bar without further fighting and screaming or join to the football section.
  • It is much safer for the society.

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