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  • The article I'd like to render is entitled ''The dispute can not do without''.
  • The authot's communicative aim is to encourage people to a healthy lifestyle and to train will power.
  • In this article the author touches upon several problems: a problem of passive lifestyle, a problem of gluttony, a problem of laziness, a psychological problem.
  • The author takes up a firm attitude that active lifestyle is healthier than a diet.
  • We should try to take care of our body, but do not neglect it.
  • The author declares, that we should eat food when we hungry.
  • People should do some physical exersises and sleep a lot.
  • People should chew food slower. Be active!
  • The author proclaims that people should find themselves problems and stress and try to fight it.
  • The author wants that women become more active.
  • Our figure becomes more better and we get a success, when we will eat healthy food.
  • We should eat more fresh fruits, vegetables, potatoes, milk and dairy products.
  • Expert says that it is better to have more food and eat it more slowly than rare, but a lot.
  • People should drink less alchohol.
  • Alcohol contains a lot of calories.
  • People should engage themselves, body and soul.
  • It makes us more confident.
  • It is very useful for our figure.
  • The author is sure to take up a firm attitude that people must want to be more athletic and healthy.
  • In conclusion, I want to say that The greatest wealth is health.
  • As for me I try to eat useful food, I don't drink coca-cola, limonade, don't eat chrisps.
  • Also, i do some exersisec at home and jogging in the morning.
  • I want to say that our health is invaluable.
  • We should try to save from an early age.

SIUSPLAU, AJUDA A CORREGIR CADA SENTÈNCIA! - English