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My friend
My friend who gives me some good affects is 유진.
I have known her since childhood.
After I met her,I become more active.
I meet her almost everyday.
In the school, we are talking about EXO.
so i become interested in EXO.
and when we meet outside of school,we always eat spicy food and sweet dessert.
After eating,we usually go shopping and go to a movie.
I am happy when with her, so I want to be her friend forever.

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- My friend who gives me some good affects is 유진.
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- I have known her since childhood.
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- After I met her,I become more active.
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- I meet her almost everyday.
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- In the school, we are talking about EXO.
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- so i become interested in EXO.
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- and when we meet outside of school,we always eat spicy food and sweet dessert.
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- After eating,we usually go shopping and go to a movie.
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- I am happy when with her, so I want to be her friend forever.
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