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The war
A man came back from Iraq's battle field.
He can feel that the war brink back.
Years of violence and bloodshed had left much in the country in ruins.
After coming back he found that much had changed in the intervening years.
So he with fulfills in resolution to fight for peace world, he intends to involve with volunteer organization.
The war was escalating to many countries.
Compensations are not enough for pain they have passed before.
Think about the world.

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- The war
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- A man came back from Iraq's battle field.
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- He can feel that the war brink back.
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- Years of violence and bloodshed had left much in the country in ruins.
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- After coming back he found that much had changed in the intervening years.
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- So he with fulfills in resolution to fight for peace world, he intends to involve with volunteer organization.
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- The war was escalating to many countries.
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- Compensations are not enough for pain they have passed before.
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- Think about the world.
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