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Usual day
After breakfast I went to swim by a boat with other 4 person.
I had a good time.
It was an interesting and funny.
I also jumped into the river and tried to swim near the our sailing boat.
I ate soup, porridge,meat, tomato on the dinner.
Then I cast the knives in the trees and improved a swimming technique.
In the evening I watched a great film which called "The Karate Kid".

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- After breakfast I went to swim by a boat with other 4 person.
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문장 2
- I had a good time.
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- It was an interesting and funny.
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- I also jumped into the river and tried to swim near the our sailing boat.
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- I ate soup, porridge,meat, tomato on the dinner.
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- Then I cast the knives in the trees and improved a swimming technique.
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- In the evening I watched a great film which called "The Karate Kid".
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