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my dog
My dog is a male, color bringé, it is a "bouledogue français".
He snore very hardly when he sleep but he is very friendly with me.
He is a player.

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句子 1
- My dog is a male, color bringé, it is a "bouledogue français".
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- He snore very hardly when he sleep but he is very friendly with me.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- He is a player.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3