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Text from ArwenNguyen - English

  • Infance

  • With someone's life, the first year of the life is important in development stage backward.
  • As soon as a baby was born, cognitive, communicative, physical ability doesn't still achieve normal like adult.
  • They need a long time progession to grow up and recognise the outside world.
  • In stages, they need an upbringing environment because there are crucial milestones need to be improved.
  • Uncompletely physical and mind is showed clearly in this stage.
  • A sensitive skin, immature instinct, weakly body, that's so, they need to be taken care of the whole day, whole night for 2 years first.
  • When they grow up a little bit, they can feel something in real life and out of the door, skills will be more, connective ability will also pull up.
  • When the baby comes into toddler stage, we are going to prepare for them basicly knowledge.
  • We are going to role a mentor to guide them to right thing, suggest and play with them because this is important stage in independent development.
  • Immature brain will br replaced by imagination they understand language and they can show us many incredible things.
  • Try it and see.
  • When they step into adolescence stage, character, brain physical with close improve.
  • By good nurture and taking care of parents, family, they will have a rewarding life to explore.

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