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Hello!
This is the first text I write.
I've been studying English for almost two years.
I really want to learn it and practise it.
I'd like to receive help from you.
Please help me, I don't have anyone to talk with in English!

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- Hello!
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句子 1
- This is the first text I write.
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句子 2
- I've been studying English for almost two years.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I really want to learn it and practise it.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I'd like to receive help from you.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Please help me, I don't have anyone to talk with in English!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5