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My journey
Today I celebrated my birthday even if it's not really my birthday.
Indeed, I was born on 1 May.
I couldn't celebrate this day because of my exam; so I went in restaurant with my parents, and then I celebrated with my friend and, later with my family.
It's not so bad because the weather is very good.
It's not too hot and there is not cloud. Not only one.
Last month, it was not the same !
So we discussed together a lot, we dranks and ate.
We had a rest on the garden and played with my dog. It was nice.
What a same that we must to go in work tommorrow !
Have a good night ! See you later.

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- My journey
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- Today I celebrated my birthday even if it's not really my birthday.
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- Indeed, I was born on 1 May.
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句子 3
- I couldn't celebrate this day because of my exam; so I went in restaurant with my parents, and then I celebrated with my friend and, later with my family.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- It's not so bad because the weather is very good.
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句子 5
- It's not too hot and there is not cloud. Not only one.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- Last month, it was not the same !
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句子 7
- So we discussed together a lot, we dranks and ate.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- We had a rest on the garden and played with my dog. It was nice.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- What a same that we must to go in work tommorrow !
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
句子 10
- Have a good night ! See you later.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10