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persian poetry
hello I am so happy to become a member in this not real world.
Where all the countries and cultures are helping together to learn new languages.
I want to speak english as well as a native in english.
And I can help you to learn iranian language.
I will be very cheerfull if you help me, instead I help you to learn my language.
Maybe it is interesting for you that we had very exelent poet in our country such as:hafez, ferdosi, saadi, molavi(roomi) and...
If you learn farsi you will be able to read our wonderfull poetry.
If you can help me, please tell me. Thanks a lot. :-):-):-)

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- persian poetry
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- hello I am so happy to become a member in this not real world.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- Where all the countries and cultures are helping together to learn new languages.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- I want to speak english as well as a native in english.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
Kalimat 4
- And I can help you to learn iranian language.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
Kalimat 5
- I will be very cheerfull if you help me, instead I help you to learn my language.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5
Kalimat 6
- Maybe it is interesting for you that we had very exelent poet in our country such as:hafez, ferdosi, saadi, molavi(roomi) and...
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 6
Kalimat 7
- If you learn farsi you will be able to read our wonderfull poetry.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 7
Kalimat 8
- If you can help me, please tell me. Thanks a lot. :-):-):-)
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 8