Korekty

Text from Rita165 - English

  • Success

  • Nowadays, many people associate success with the money, however there are some people who believe that not only those people who are rich can be successful.
  • In my opinion, successful people not those people who are wealthy but those who have reached their goals and implemented themselves in life.
  • Well paid job big house near the sea coast are not everything.
  • Many people associate success with talent, good family and ability to cope with difficulties.
  • Moreover, I think that success is connected with happiness and satisfaction.
  • It depends on priorities of the person and it doesn’t mean that money provide you with happiness, maybe costly cars and exotic holiday are not what you were looking for.
  • At the same time, a lot of people want to get a good education and prestigious job, because money gives you different opportunities.
  • Furthermore, if you are rich, than you are popular and many people want to meet you and make friends with you.
  • I agree with that point of view, however, there is an opinion that people who have everything they want can feel an empty inside, because there is nothing to aspire to, no goals, and no desires.
  • I think that it is difficult to make true friends if you are rich because many people want to friend with you because of your money.
  • All in all, everyone decides for himself how to become a successful person and everyone understand success differently.
  • But I suppose that if you want to become successful you have to believe in your abilities and develop your own talents.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
    • Nowadays, many people associate success with the money, however there are some people who believe that not only those people who are rich can be successful.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • In my opinion, successful people not those people who are wealthy but those who have reached their goals and implemented themselves in life.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • It depends on priorities of the person and it doesn’t mean that money provide you with happiness, maybe costly cars and exotic holiday are not what you were looking for.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • At the same time, a lot of people want to get a good education and prestigious job, because money gives you different opportunities.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • I agree with that point of view, however, there is an opinion that people who have everything they want can feel an empty inside, because there is nothing to aspire to, no goals, and no desires.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • I think that it is difficult to make true friends if you are rich because many people want to friend with you because of your money.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
  • Zdanie 11
    • All in all, everyone decides for himself how to become a successful person and everyone understand success differently.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
  • Zdanie 12
    • But I suppose that if you want to become successful you have to believe in your abilities and develop your own talents.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12