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  • My family

  • There are 4 members in my family.They are my parents, my oldest brother and me.My father is a 43-year-old tailor.He has a important role in family who is always willing to do heavy affairs such as repairing roof, replacing old lights...He will be strict when we don't obey him or make wrong things, but he teachs us many interesting lessons around.Talking about my dear mother, she is the same age as my father.She is the best good woman that I have known.She makes everything in home from cooking to taking us to school.She ia busy with household all day.Especially,her cooking talent, she always prepare food that we like.Person who is oldest in my family is my brother.He is 8 years old and currently studying at the primary school in Vietnam.He is so cute and obey everyone .Always,he make people feel happy and nice smile .He is mainly my family's motivation.I love my family a lot.I hope that we will keep good feeling forever in anycase.

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    • There are 4 members in my family.They are my parents, my oldest brother and me.My father is a 43-year-old tailor.He has a important role in family who is always willing to do heavy affairs such as repairing roof, replacing old lights...He will be strict when we don't obey him or make wrong things, but he teachs us many interesting lessons around.Talking about my dear mother, she is the same age as my father.She is the best good woman that I have known.She makes everything in home from cooking to taking us to school.She ia busy with household all day.Especially,her cooking talent, she always prepare food that we like.Person who is oldest in my family is my brother.He is 8 years old and currently studying at the primary school in Vietnam.He is so cute and obey everyone .Always,he make people feel happy and nice smile .He is mainly my family's motivation.I love my family a lot.I hope that we will keep good feeling forever in anycase.
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