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Text from VickyVenz - English

I need your help
I'm writing the CV for a company and I don't know how articulate an idea in English.
"I'd like to working in company, when I can (do personal development) and I think TBI perfect choice to make that." I want to say "progressing like professional and like personality" pls tell me, how write this correct without mistakes

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- I need your help
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Zdanie 1
- I'm writing the CV for a company and I don't know how articulate an idea in English.
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- DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
Zdanie 2
- "I'd like to working in company, when I can (do personal development) and I think TBI perfect choice to make that." I want to say "progressing like professional and like personality" pls tell me, how write this correct without mistakes
  Głosuj teraz!
- DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2