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Please correct me whenever i make a mistake
Poor... i beseech you, please don't follow me again. Why?
I tries, i worked industrious and hard from morning till night.
I have a good job that many people dreams but ... i have bad salary.
I dream i will rich, i know it will not happen but there is nothing to stop me dreaming.

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- Please correct me whenever i make a mistake
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- Poor... i beseech you, please don't follow me again. Why?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I tries, i worked industrious and hard from morning till night.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I have a good job that many people dreams but ... i have bad salary.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I dream i will rich, i know it will not happen but there is nothing to stop me dreaming.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4