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Teenagers and Internet
One study said that many teenagers spend too much time online.
I belive that they don't spend this time doping useful activities that they help them work, socialisme and relax.
Second more studies in different schools, students who use Internet regularly, they think their schoolwork suffer and they are missing out on their social Life.
However, students are more relaxed without Internet, because they have much more Free time.

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문장 1
- One study said that many teenagers spend too much time online.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- I belive that they don't spend this time doping useful activities that they help them work, socialisme and relax.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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- Second more studies in different schools, students who use Internet regularly, they think their schoolwork suffer and they are missing out on their social Life.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- However, students are more relaxed without Internet, because they have much more Free time.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4