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  • One of my favarite book is crayon- shinchan by yoshito usui.its a clapstic set in japan.its a story of a boy call shin.shin is 5 years old.he is dynamic and mischievous.he very like beatyful girls, super man and miss NaNaKo.his father is a manager of company.he like beautyful girl and modal.however,he love his family so much.shin' mother is miserly.she like disconts and food testing in the super market.his elder sister like hansome,flan cake and branded.shin and his family alway creat the troubles for everyone.therefore shin is a super stir.shin and classmate make the teachers unflagging when they look after them.
  • The end,action of shin make everybody realised the life value and the love .
  • I like the book for a number of seasons.the story is gripping and interesting.it created the laughter for reader.its humorous.the characters is very lovely.it makes me relax and feel comfortable after a tiring day.i thoroungly recommend it Please check for mistake on this paragraph.
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    • One of my favarite book is crayon- shinchan by yoshito usui.its a clapstic set in japan.its a story of a boy call shin.shin is 5 years old.he is dynamic and mischievous.he very like beatyful girls, super man and miss NaNaKo.his father is a manager of company.he like beautyful girl and modal.however,he love his family so much.shin' mother is miserly.she like disconts and food testing in the super market.his elder sister like hansome,flan cake and branded.shin and his family alway creat the troubles for everyone.therefore shin is a super stir.shin and classmate make the teachers unflagging when they look after them.
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    • I like the book for a number of seasons.the story is gripping and interesting.it created the laughter for reader.its humorous.the characters is very lovely.it makes me relax and feel comfortable after a tiring day.i thoroungly recommend it Please check for mistake on this paragraph.
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