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If i ruled the world,the first thing i'd do is prevent war ad terrorism.IS is one of the terrorisms.it is danger and it skiiled a lot of people in the world.the next thing i'd do is suppress the racisn.As I see it,the racisn still exist in many country.The black skin people are treatmented not fair.I'd make few rule to protect them.In my view,we should build some the hoppital for the need of many patients.I would punish the teachers whom violence the child in the kindergaden.

There are some serious thing I' d do too.I'd reduce polution from factories and encourage everybody to throw rubbish in a right way.I would establish the organize to tidy rubbish on the rivers and plant tree for enviroment cleaning.Finally,I'd use the cars which use electricity intead of petrol.