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A little writing exercise
My cat brings dead mouses to home.
I buy cat food for her every week but, cats have some tendencies caused of their wild origins.
Hunting is one of them.
My home is safe area for her, so she brings de hunts here.
Cat's has many underlying insects from wild life.
I think we have accept they're not just pets.
Living on streets is dangerous for them, but we could know our homes is not enough for cats.

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- A little writing exercise
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- My cat brings dead mouses to home.
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- I buy cat food for her every week but, cats have some tendencies caused of their wild origins.
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- Hunting is one of them.
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- My home is safe area for her, so she brings de hunts here.
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- Cat's has many underlying insects from wild life.
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- I think we have accept they're not just pets.
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- Living on streets is dangerous for them, but we could know our homes is not enough for cats.
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