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It snows !
It's half past seven, I wake up.
My kitty comes in my bedroom, she climbs the stairs and plays with me.
She bites my arm but i have no pain.
I eat my breakfast, take a shower and get dressed.
I look at the window. Oh, it snows !
I take my coat, my boots and I run under the snow.
It is so fun to play !

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- It snows !
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문장 1
- It's half past seven, I wake up.
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문장 2
- My kitty comes in my bedroom, she climbs the stairs and plays with me.
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문장 3
- She bites my arm but i have no pain.
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문장 4
- I eat my breakfast, take a shower and get dressed.
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문장 5
- I look at the window. Oh, it snows !
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문장 6
- I take my coat, my boots and I run under the snow.
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문장 7
- It is so fun to play !
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