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My vacations
Hey there, thanks for read my little text... ...
I'm on vacations now.
I have plans to improve my English skills and start to learn French as well.
French seems to be a little dificult, but I know that I can nail it.
I also want to visit my nephew more than usual, because I miss them so much.
My girlfriend already told me that she wanted more attention this period, because when I am not on vacations I have a reall busy schedule.
I hope to be able to achieve these things this July.

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- My vacations
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- Hey there, thanks for read my little text... ...
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- I'm on vacations now.
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문장 3
- I have plans to improve my English skills and start to learn French as well.
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문장 4
- French seems to be a little dificult, but I know that I can nail it.
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문장 5
- I also want to visit my nephew more than usual, because I miss them so much.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- My girlfriend already told me that she wanted more attention this period, because when I am not on vacations I have a reall busy schedule.
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- I hope to be able to achieve these things this July.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7