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  • THE SOCCER, MY FAVORITE SPORT.

  • For me, the soccer is the best thing that could have existed, was what more attracts me from child, exactly at the age of 6 it was when I had my first T-shirt of a team of soccer, it was the T-shirt of the team for which I became passionate and this one simultaneously turned the team of my loves, it is from Real Madrid, the best team of the whole history of the soccer.
  • This sport likes to see it to me so much as play it, it is very entertaining, exciting and the one that assembles more people in the world, example: "the selection Colombia”.
  • This sport would practise all my life without resting, for me to play the soccer is to be in sky, nothing is compared with this.
  • Also to see it is beautiful, for me it is like the soap opera of love of the men.
  • Since he had said it previously, I am a madman got excited about real Madrid, this team is over many things and many persons also, also I like Junior of Barranquilla and of course the selection Colombia.
  • My idol in this sport is called Iker Casillas, doorman of real Madrid, is my example to be continued because also I get out of debt in this position but neither can be missing the best player of the world, Cristiano Ronaldo.
  • Anyway, the soccer is the best sport of all, it is the only and incomparable.
  • Sometimes it gives me glories and in other occasions sadness, but I will never get tired of him.

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    • For me, the soccer is the best thing that could have existed, was what more attracts me from child, exactly at the age of 6 it was when I had my first T-shirt of a team of soccer, it was the T-shirt of the team for which I became passionate and this one simultaneously turned the team of my loves, it is from Real Madrid, the best team of the whole history of the soccer.
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    • This sport likes to see it to me so much as play it, it is very entertaining, exciting and the one that assembles more people in the world, example: "the selection Colombia”.
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    • This sport would practise all my life without resting, for me to play the soccer is to be in sky, nothing is compared with this.
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    • Since he had said it previously, I am a madman got excited about real Madrid, this team is over many things and many persons also, also I like Junior of Barranquilla and of course the selection Colombia.
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    • My idol in this sport is called Iker Casillas, doorman of real Madrid, is my example to be continued because also I get out of debt in this position but neither can be missing the best player of the world, Cristiano Ronaldo.
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