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  • about "the nightingale and the rose"

  • i am greatful that if you can help me to find out the grammer mistakes.
  • In the story, some stylistic devices are used broadly.
  • Firstly, “Surely love is wonderful thing.
  • It is more precious than emeralds, and dearer than fine opals.
  • ” .It is thinking in a person’s way.
  • The nightingale has been given personality and people’s emotion.
  • What’s more, “His hair is dark as the hyacinth-- blossom, and his lips are red as the rose of his desire”, this sentence convey us how handsome the young student is via metaphor.
  • Finally, repetition can be easy find in the story as well, which attracts

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