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  • Today is July 6th

  • Yesterday, Sunday, my friends and me went to visit the funfair, I don't like because I get dizzy easily, when I took many photos, but I like I really like get on the wheel, I feel bad in the rollercoaster I like get on the wheel and see everything, more if stay with somebody special, yesterday I stayed with my friends.
  • In july I'm in summer vacations, but I can't go to travel, because my father and mother need me in the restaurant, in the morning I had a appointment with my doctor, but the hospital don't gave to me the medicine, then tomorrow I will go to buy it because I need take three pills, I have epilepsy.
  • I like go to visit my mommy, I like cook with her I really like but I feel more fat, I know, my sensei is going to scold to me, I'm thin and young but I practice taekwondo then I need stay good physical.
  • Now I will go to the market and look up the towels but always doesn't has in the market.
  • My little cousin gave me a necklace, it's singular, it's a little guitar.
  • My friends want to I give to them my necklace, but I don't give the presents.

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    • Yesterday, Sunday, my friends and me went to visit the funfair, I don't like because I get dizzy easily, when I took many photos, but I like I really like get on the wheel, I feel bad in the rollercoaster I like get on the wheel and see everything, more if stay with somebody special, yesterday I stayed with my friends.
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    • In july I'm in summer vacations, but I can't go to travel, because my father and mother need me in the restaurant, in the morning I had a appointment with my doctor, but the hospital don't gave to me the medicine, then tomorrow I will go to buy it because I need take three pills, I have epilepsy.
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    • I like go to visit my mommy, I like cook with her I really like but I feel more fat, I know, my sensei is going to scold to me, I'm thin and young but I practice taekwondo then I need stay good physical.
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